Production Log 15

I have completed my first draft for my magazine as shown below. I am quite satisfied with how it has turned out. However I think that it needs a lot of adjustments made to it to make it look more professional and complete as at the moment I think there are too many white spaces on the front cover and first double page spread. I am going to improve this by trying to take more pictures or use more cretive sell lines and fonts to take up more of the space. To find out what else needs to be improved, I am going to ask my target audience and few outside my target audience what they think about the magazine. There input can help me improve my magazine. I am also going to compare my magazine to one that already exists to see if I have included anything new or taken ideas that have already been used and either improved on them or whether they need to be improved in my next draft.